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Polyacrostic - Aim to Please Her - Amuse in Key Plan

SmileNotes on Polyacrostic Palimpsests Smile..

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Acrostic : Verse in which adjacent letters for a word  or message

Polyacrostic : Several acrostics within the same composition

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Acrostics to be found below 

Aim to please her 7 times – 3 vertical 4 times diagonal

Amuse in inky plan - twice - vertically .

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Palimpsest : A manuscript on which more than one text is written  with earlier writing, or one level of meaning, partially visible.

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The text appears twice here :.

I : plain text - in black
II: Complete acrostic palimpsests highlighted 
 

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Amuse in Key Plan

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Ask my plan, the stanzas plain appear.

Miss or discover mirror, cipher print refined.

Unmoved ? Must we submit, fame undermined ?

See this tale has stated stamp, hint clear

Ever on sonnet's head hope offers to cheer

Inset pipes with inner pipes wit spine.

Now swell a smile new, spell an inky line.

Know here we hearken, shared is tale sincere.

Eyes gala avoid wet blabla also.  Hear,

Years pass, so play, they pass swift, seek some sign.

Plea on her heart pens once dream design

List light's shelled truth rich he hid here.

"Aim to please her" arms lines entered, see

Neat chart is furnished from all error free.


  

Aim to please her 7 times – 3 vertical 4 time diagonal

Amuse in inky plan - twice - Vertically

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Askmyplanthestanzasplainappear

Missordiscovermirrorcipherprintrefined

Unmovedmustwesubmitfameundermined

Seethistalehasstatedstamphintclear

Everonsonnetsheadhopeofferstocheer

Insetpipeswithinnerpipeswitspine

Nowswellasmilenewspellaninkyline

Knowherewehearkensharedistalesincere

Eyesgalaavoidwetblablaalsohear

Yearspasssoplaytheypassswiftseeksomesign

Pleaonherheartpensoncedreamdesign

Listlightsshelledtruthrichhehidhere

Aimtopleaseherarmslinesenteredsee

Neatchartisfurnishedfromallerrorfree 

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© Jonathan Robin polyacrostic palimpsest sonnet written

       first version 26 March 1998

       this version 8 January 2007

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  • enitsirhC
    June 22

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    Wow!
    This is really good!

    I would never be able to write anything quite like this!
    Very impressive!

    Thanks for sharing!

    I'd love to read more from you in the future!


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    July 4, 2007

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    This is awesome and quite a unique
    and different piece. I don't think
    I could ever pull something like
    this off! lol Well done
    and thanks a lot for sharing this
    one here! Keep up the wonderful
    work!




    Jeremy0826

  • February 21, 2007
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    AWESOME


  • klassy lassy
    January 10, 2007

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    Aim to please her, amuse in inky plan. Accomplished! I agree with shewolfnative, it would take me a month of Sundays and probably still only come up with gobblety gook!


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    January 9, 2007
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    Now, I woudl spend many days with graph paper flowers building ont he floor before I cudl even begin to attempt such as this...and such as this not only fulfills form, but sends theme marching along to my door.
    Still and again...amaing!!!!!
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