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Polyacrostic - Aim to Please Her - Amuse in Key Plan

 Notes on Polyacrostic Palimpsests 

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Acrostic : Verse in which adjacent letters for a word  or message

Polyacrostic : Several acrostics within the same composition

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Acrostics to be found below 

Aim to please her 7 times – 3 vertical 4 times diagonal

Amuse in inky plan - twice - vertically .

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Palimpsest : A manuscript on which more than one text is written  with earlier writing, or one level of meaning, partially visible.

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The text appears twice here :.

I : plain text - in black
II: Complete acrostic palimpsests highlighted 
 

Smile

A Muse in Key Plan

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Ask my plan, the stanzas plain appear.

Miss or discover mirror, cipher print refined.

Unmoved ? Must we submit, fame undermined ?

See this tale has stated stamp, hint clear

Ever on sonnet's head hope offers to cheer

Inset pipes with inner pipes wit spine.

Now swell a smile new, spell an inky line.

Know here we hearken, shared is tale sincere.

Eyes gala avoid wet blabla also.  Hear,

Years pass, so play, they pass swift, seek some sign.

Plea on her heart pens once dream design

List light's shelled truth rich he hid here.

"Aim to please her" arms lines entered, see

Neat chart is furnished from all error free.


  

Aim to please her 7 times – 3 vertical 4 diagonal

Amuse in inky plan - twice - Vertically

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Askmyplanthestanzasplainappear

Missordiscovermirrorcipherprintrefined

Unmovedmustwesubmitfameundermined

Seethistalehasstatedstamphintclear

Everonsonnetsheadhopeofferstocheer

Insetpipeswithinnerpipeswitspine

Nowswellasmilenewspellaninkyline

Knowherewehearkensharedistalesincere

Eyesgalaavoidwetblablaalsohear

Yearspasssoplaytheypassswiftseeksomesign

Pleaonherheartpensoncedreamdesign

Listlightsshelledtruthrichhehidhere

Aimtopleaseherarmslinesenteredsee

Neatchartisfurnishedfromallerrorfree 

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© Jonathan Robin polyacrostic palimpsest sonnet written

       first version 26 March 1998

       this version 8 January 2007

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  • wow this really looks extremely hard to write. You have my respect for being able to write something so hard. I bet this kind of write takes you a while to do.

    Thanks for teaching me a little bit about this write. I really know very little about it.

    Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.

  • I definitely needed the color code to see what you were doing. This is pure genius, I loved it.


  • Umi Juvariel
    April 9

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    Well, that was indeed different, and I actually learned something here. I am glad you took the time to write this and explain what you were doing. It really made this all the better. The poems were wonderful, and the color coding, I must admit, really helped me to find where you had hidden the rest. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.

  • RoshniD
    March 28

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    Justified genius whose
    Reach in and around
    Omniana to capture muse
    Beats every odd.
    Intellect undefined-
    Necessitates more than mere nod

  • brilliant

  • whoa! that's so awesome! its definately something i wanna try now. great job


  • Sunburst
    March 28
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    This is so awesome. I love it.It's quite unique.I like it a lot.

  • Wow very originaly but amazing. Awesome job. =)


  • dwellondreams
    February 25
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    This was fantastic and very different. Surprising but wonderful all the same. Great job.


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    February 25

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    wow blow my mind , I am confused. Eye gala avoid wet blala! what kinda language is that, it was a pleasure


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    February 25
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    my mind is boggled and I am so lost in the cross-eyed wondering. Great job!!!


  • Rockster
    February 25

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    Blows me away!

    1st time I ever saw or heard of this. I give you the utmost respect for both skill and knowledge to do this. Awesome


  • X...
    February 25
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    lol...i would never be able to take the time to do that...awesome


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 25

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    Wow,I never saw one of these before, and it is
    facinating form,well thought out and structured, thank you for sharing and it does speak to us as a poem,
    good luck
    MM


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    February 25
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    oops! forgot the applause.

  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    February 25

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    wow

    i am certainly glad that you explained this before i read it. i still am a bit confused but in an awed sort of way. you never cease to amaze me. i clicked because i had no clue what your categories meant and am still not sure that i do but you have challenged me to figure it out. thank you for shairng this with me today. viyanna rosemarie


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    February 25

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    Excellent

    A most intriguing write, indeed. You always seem to come up with something rather unique. Thanks for sharing this one with us.


  • MassMan
    February 25

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    This is brilliant piece of poetic genius which shows great talent. Wow! I admire your work--but I find it much over the top for this more basic contest.
    A Wonderful overkill.


  • Luciferschild
    February 11
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    wow


  • herrlurch
    February 2

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    This seems to be a classic - over ten years old, but hardly ever rivalled. You are one poem of a kind, monsieur Robin! *hats off* Götz


  • enitsirhC
    June 22, 2008

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    Wow!
    This is really good!

    I would never be able to write anything quite like this!
    Very impressive!

    Thanks for sharing!

    I'd love to read more from you in the future!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 4, 2007

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    This is awesome and quite a unique
    and different piece. I don't think
    I could ever pull something like
    this off! lol Well done
    and thanks a lot for sharing this
    one here! Keep up the wonderful
    work!




    Jeremy0826


  • February 21, 2007
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    AWESOME


  • klassy lassy
    January 10, 2007

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    Aim to please her, amuse in inky plan. Accomplished! I agree with shewolfnative, it would take me a month of Sundays and probably still only come up with gobblety gook!


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    January 9, 2007
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    Now, I woudl spend many days with graph paper flowers building ont he floor before I cudl even begin to attempt such as this...and such as this not only fulfills form, but sends theme marching along to my door.
    Still and again...amaing!!!!!

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