Black tears fall from me
In this clouded room I cannot see
No more LOVE left to find
Fragmented dreams inside my MIND
Why do you have to go
Just like the rest we were so close
And now our time is limited
8 months, 6 seconds then your dead
Is this my fate
Agony, hurt and hate
I cry every night
Losing my will, I cannot fight
Another real LOVE is lost
Another heart comes crashing down
Another price, can’t pay the cost
Another soul falls to the ground
Will you remember me
Never MIND don’t tell me
Please don’t forget me
I know it wasn’t meant to be
I step onward not looking back
Without you here, I slowly fall into the black…
“…Cross my heart as HOPE dies
All my LIFE, full of lies
Once again, fear remains
LOVE will be gone again…”
A contest entry
- My AP FAVORITES by Aeonna.
400 points, ended January 22, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Voices by Jimmah324.
700 points, ended February 15, 2007, 67 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - #4 Losing a loved one. by xox-lankan-xox.
500 points, ended March 13, 131 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Broken R! by Ms Raneika.
600 points, ended March 9, 2007, 88 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thanks for entering my contest this here poem potray's your deep aching heart...remember no one is destined to be alone...heartbroken etc. it's all just a test if you pass and do good you will do good on the other's to follow...never fail...keep hope alive...love, Raneika
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Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest and the best of luck to you.
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Wow I really really really really really liked this poem! Thanks so much for entering this piece into my contest. I thought writing in uppercase was sorta odd, but I don't really care I'm just glad you entered this wonderful piece into my contest! This was fantastic, I will be around to read and comment more on your poems so until then and once again thanks! Bye!
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Love is something that most of us experience as quite some heartbreakes to begin with... but I see that as the big journey you have to do if you want to meet the true one
sooner or later, you will find that special person 
Best of luck in the contest! -
woah...
Great job. Very deep, very emotional. Keep writing.
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"Black tears fall from me
In this clouded room I cannot see
No more LOVE left to find
Fragmented dreams inside my MIND" is my favorite part great write
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this is me if tommy ever leaves me, i would die with out him, this is an great poem and i love it
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pulsating...
I really enjoyed this, very emotional and deep. You poor thing, if anything the only advice I can give you is no matter how nice it feels to be close.... really look at it... you can't love everyone, you may feel strongly for them but don't let yourself imagine them as something they are not... don't get to carried away if someone else doesn't feel the same. I've learned that the hard way. -
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Ok....who is this about?, is this another Sarah poem, or did something bad happen and u didn't tell me?...either way, it's very sad and i understand this like none of the rest you have written, it makes me want 2 cry, anyways, either way witrh who it's about, i'm sorry *long distance hug* .....talk 2 u later!
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