I have a scar
That cannot be seen
It’s not on my skin
It’s inside of me
Though it cannot be seen
You know it’s there
Just look at my expression
Saying “life isn’t fair”
Who gave it to me?
I will never tell
But the day I got it
My life went to hell
Invisible to the eye
But clear to the soul
The scars deep inside me
And I hide it down below
From that day
I was always alone
Didn’t want any friends
Was silent going home
I isolate myself
Just to take away the pain
Feeling the cold tears
Fall from my eyes like rain
I have no more fears
And I don’t even cry
Why I got this scar?
I will never know why
I guess no one knows
What happened in the end
I just hope the scar on my heart
Will some day mend
~Kay~
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Comments
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Very good
I really enjoyed the flow of your poem. The ending really got me though:
Why I got this scar?
I will never know why
I guess no one knows
What happened in the end
I just hope the scar on my heart
Will some day mend
Excellent way to end the poem. Thanks for entering and the best of luck to you. Kassie -
Great poem!!! I can relate.
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WoW
this was so true and i feel like that alot. i do isolate myself so i can understand. it is a great peice full of deep "hidden" emotion. keep on writing.
-----~LD -
WoW
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