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I Cannot Be A Barbie Doll

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I知 big and bold and beautiful
Outspoken to or so I知 told

I don稚 care how they look at me
Just so long as they do

For once you get to know me
My face you won稚 forget

My personality will I知 told
Take over once we致e met

For laugh with me as I知 sure you will
My body size wont matter

And if you need somewhere to cry
My shoulders are well padded

I cannot be a Barbie doll
My cleavage wont allow it

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Option 8 because big is beautiful

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  • Yunalonei
    August 11, 2008
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    Loved it

    This is a great piece i especially love the last lines.
    Good luck in the contest


  • Tarja
    October 12, 2007
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    Okay... First of all.. congrats on the bronze in the contest Fat and Sassy... I love that! And as for your poem... it's fantastic. I love the attitude! And the picture really adds a lot to it! Thanks so much for entering this and good luck.


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    April 11, 2007
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    this poem was funny but also kind of sad! great work! of course why would you want to be a barbie doll? there made of plastic and have no internal organs! lol anyway excellent work and good luck in the contest!!!




    -Steve-


  • widesummer
    January 10, 2007
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    It's brilliant, i liked the bit about the cleavage, well done.


  • Walking shadow
    January 9, 2007

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    Intresting verses as always. I love you no matter your body size. This piece is great. I love you for your spirit. What is in your heart. A good heart is always a sexy heart.


  • xsaveyourherox
    January 8, 2007

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    i love the last stanza. flawless, truely. good luck with the contest -- thank you for entering this
    -<3 skooter-


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 8, 2007

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    oh you go girl, i love this poem you have done a great job on this, it is amazing keep it flowing and good luck in the contest, i want you to win this, i really do


  • Fire N Ice
    January 8, 2007

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    LOL

    Hun this is so cool!
    you go girl! i love this, it shows a whole new side of you,
    And its a fantastic attitude to have too!


  • princess 32
    January 8, 2007
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    i like this..was good to read..love the pic too.

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