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Fingertips

Just a few inches away
Reach for me
You're so close
You're nearly there

Don't you dare let go
You are too strong to fall
Look at me
I can pull you up

I may seem far away
But I'm closer than you think
Just reach out
And grab hold

Don't you dare fall.

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  • FallenxAngelxMisfit
    March 3, 2007

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    this is another very beauitful poems. it made me feel like i can do anything and that another good job done


  • x Gemini x
    January 9, 2007
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    First, let me thank you for entering my contest.

    Second:

    This poem was very touching. Original perspective. The flow and imagery was very well done. I suggest the use of puncuation for professional look and easier reading.

    Otherwise, this was good.


  • sherry-lee
    January 8, 2007
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    this has so many levels. Figuratively and literally. I felt the battle; sensed the encouragement, reassurance, focus and motivation to keep going, and be strong..
    this piece made that connection with this reader. point taken. well done!