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Darkness falls,

confined in Master's den

 

Kneeling - naked -

baring all for His pleasure

Viridian pearls glimmer

in submissive remorse

 

Punishment begins

for last night's

playful restraint of dominance

 

Bound in leather shackles

hung above His alter

Fierce lioness

turns passive kitten

 

Blackness steals sight

heightening senses

Virile hands travel

taunting and teasing

 

Caramel peaks

respond attentively

Spine tingling sensations

stir legs trembling

 

Hushed silence bare witness

to a palmed collision

Reddened paw prints

mark ownership

 

Desire's ache

heard in whispered pleas

Sensory overload is seen

in Lust's drippings

 

Rough hands adjust hips

revealing river rapids

Stern ore plunged deep

into a heated channel of bliss

 

Repeatedly thrusting up stream

like spawning salmon

Wolven fangs leave

tender shoulders tattooed

 

White wave of release

barrels through liquid canyon

River's mouth overflows

with passions spilled

 

Punishment complete

and forgiveness granted

Lesson in obedience

ends with loving kisses


 

 

 

 

Author notes

option 4


For Blazing White Wolf, my Master
with all my love




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  • Lady-Pegasus
    February 27, 2007

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    Thank you for your contest submission.Very sensuous write that is very descriptive. Some of the imagery, to me, was a little off, but mostly a very good piece and i am certain your Master shall be pleased, one way or another! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e *


  • SensualWhispers
    February 27, 2007

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    Very well

    The flow of the poem is well written and the way it is stated is good. I enjoyed the way it just stated dominance and submissiveness. Thanks for entering and good luck to you. Kassie


  • slipperssun gold member
    February 27, 2007

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    this is a very sensual write, i am sure your Master was impressed with how you wrote for him... i love the way you use words to describve the events.. it is brilliant


  • Blazing White Wolf
    January 14, 2007

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    oh this is quite the interpation of the picture heatd expression satiating the sickness that dwelves within Master oh my quite the hot write wwith images that stirs the darkness I clicg too thank youu My lioness :

    Love,
    Master


  • slipperssun gold member
    January 12, 2007

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    Rough hands adjust hips

    revealing river rapids

    Stern ore plunged deep

    into a heated channel of bliss

    damn this is hot...
    good luck in the contest


  • xXx W1ck3D xXx
    January 8, 2007

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    Awesome job...
    You did wonderful with this. I told you that this pic would awaken your muse. It is HOT HOT HOT!!!

    I am really glad that you entered into my contest...

    You portrayed ROYO with excellence. This is going to be an extremely hard contest to judge.

    Thanks and Good Luck
    Wicked


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 8, 2007

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    Excellent write!
    Very passionate and very sexy! Sis, I wish you all the best in this contest; you wrote it very well !

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