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I'm scared..

My heart is pounding fast at first.
I looked into her eyes right into the hurt.
My vision blurs as she cries.
My heart slows down I feel like it's bursting.
I'm scared.
I don't know what to do.
My eyes burn so much from crying.
She says she close to leaving.
My heart starts pounding faster.
I don't know what to say.
The only thing that comes to mind is I'm sorry.
I keep repeating the same thing over and over.
I know.. I know.. I know..
She says she's tired.
She says she's hurt.
It could all be right.
I could fix it.
I keep telling her that I'm working on it.
I love you.
I'm forever greatful and in debt.
For the kindness you've shown me has no end.
No matter what you've always been there.
And now you're questioning.
I will understand believe me I will.
The fact that I made the mistake.
One that I will forever be ashamed of.

Tell me what you think or not I honestly don't care

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  • BrokenDreams
    February 11, 2007

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    nice write bro, I dunno whats going on with you and your girly but you got my number Kratski Bratr Use it!!

    P.S. I want my GGW back fuck face!! :-P


  • lostinthisworld
    January 10, 2007

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    Tommeh, Ich liebe dich... You know what I would say. So think it. It's been a while since you have written & I am glad that you did. You've always been there for me. Even when Kev hurt me you wanted to kick him. So just remain positive. You have my number if you ever need to use it.


    Katt


  • Angelicwhisper
    January 9, 2007
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    *sob*

    that was really good, it almost made me cry. hang in there buddy

  • rynajl
    January 8, 2007
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    Baby...I don't know what to say...
    I feel horrible because I don't know what else to do. I don't want this to happen - but please...don't make me have to do it.
    I want to be with you with the rest of my life, but I can't let you keep doing this.
    I love you, and its a beautiful poem.
    ~Jess