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Cowboys Cry

When they first meet he fell in love
He just knew that it was right
Under neath the willow tree
Was their very first time
In the mist they made love
It was the first time the Cowboy criiiiiiiiied
It was the first time the Cowboy cried

On a sunday morning his heart sank
She was going off to college
He was afraid he had lost her
You could hear his heart break
Cause his love for her would last forever
It was the second time the Cowboy criiiiiiiiied
It was the second time the Cowboy cried


Yes they cry, For love and sorrow
Yss they hurt, Just like others
Cowboys never cry, But good men do
Yes Cowboys never cry, but good men do

She came home, Soon they were married
Children followed, There was happiness and bliss
They faced pain,  They got through it together
The cowboy and the cowboys lady
Two hearts had become one, Underneath the willow tree
And so many times the cowboy criiiiiiiiiiiied
And so many times the cowboy criiiiiiiiiiiied

There were first days of school, and Graduation
Skinned knees and broken arms
A few weddings, a few deaths
A few more grandchildren born
But through it all he stayed strong
And so many times the cowboy criiiiiiiiiiiied
And so many times the cowboy criiiiiiiiiiiied

Yes they cry, For love and sorrow
Yss they hurt, Just like others
Cowboys never cry, But good men do
Yes Cowboys never cry, but good men do

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  • Maybe Anastasia
    May 26, 2007
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    yes they do. I've seen the strongest cowboy I know wipe a tear away. good write.


  • Jeb
    January 26, 2007
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    Good write!

    This is an excellent poem! I grew up in wyoming and spent most of my life there. I often worked on the ranches of friends of ours and rode in a few high school rodeos before I joined the Navy. I can really relate to this poem. It is truly a work of art! Bravo to you!


  • panegyric ink
    January 21, 2007
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    One of your better writes!


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    January 14, 2007

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    Wonderful. This is so loving and sweet. I like the same line as the others, Cowboys never cry, But good men do
    Great song. I hope all is okay, haven't seen you in a while.

    Jeannie


  • Rosemary Stroebel silver member
    January 12, 2007

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    Beautiful

    This has such a beautiful story to tell. I wish I could hear the tune that goes with these words for I believe it must be stunning.

    Well written.

    Rosemary


  • debilynn gold member
    January 8, 2007

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    excellent job on this charlie the rhythm is well done and i like the repetition throughout the poem. your message is clear and precise. thank you for s haring this with us. God bless you


  • Inside and out
    January 8, 2007
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    A beautiful poem that is sensitive and effectively written. I love the repetition that you used in this poem. My favorite line is Cowboys never cry, but good men do. Quite a clever poem my friend. I love it!


  • cherche -d -ame
    January 8, 2007

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    of course cowboys/good men cry and should. There are so many reasons in life , sad and even happy that they do spill over into tears.pssst...third stanza,second line...a typo (should be YES I think)Keep writing your feelings , your thoughts etc for us...most of all stay safe and maybe let the troops know that we do care. Oh my...if I am correct, I believe it will be four years in March that this war started
    z
    reenie

  • June-bug
    January 8, 2007

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    excellent

    Charlie this is wonderful, I love it espically the line of Cowboys never cry but good men do. The story line is great as how life unfolds once love is found. Keep them coming!!!!


  • Rose Angel gold member
    January 8, 2007

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    Cowboy, alot of us are thinking of you and praying...and as a specual day has come and gone,your importance to us,lingers on..We are thankful for all you do.There are many of us loyal to you..We know that the best Cowboys' cry..And you like all serving and working,with loved ones far away, and memories that bother you.can bother you today...God bles our workers and troops, in both lands...Iraq and Afghanistan...A wonderful poem!

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