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Heart Flutters

A soft wind licks my eyes awake
as the cool, autumn breeze chills the surrounding air.
I roll to my side, reaching for the covers
to warm myself back up,
when I see him sleeping beside me,
his chest rising and falling, rising, falling,
a melodious beat that eases me.
I prop my head in my hands
watching the silhouette of the moon,
grazing his face, defining his features.
My fingers run across his upper arm,
over the firm, smooth skin that warms my tips,
and I place a soft kiss on his shoulder.
I cuddle up behind him,
sliding my arm across his belly.
His heart thump-thumps like a distant drum,
his breath brings harmony to the night,
and I doze back off in the silver moonlight,
clutched to the only one I wish to wake with.

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  • Morgaine
    January 8, 2007

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    OMG this is so beautiful! I don't even have words for it... I just love it so much! AMAZING write Syd!


  • Desire gold member
    January 8, 2007
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    Beautiful-

    This is one Beautiful Masterpiece You have penned!
    Love the images You share and the emotions in Your
    words~
    The connection so strong~

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
    Really enjoyed inhaling this verse~
    Many blessings to You
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~