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Unreal

The blood on the floor
The heart in the sink
The guts in the tub

Are not real
A figment of your imagination
Only you see the blood covered walls

It’s in your head
Making you crazy
You think you’re insane

Because of the illusion
I put before you
Pulling out your hair

Chewing on your nails
Trying to get the images out
Pushing them out of your head

Please tell me what you think

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  • Diatribes
    May 11, 2007
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    Dont know, but its twisted.

  • the oleander
    February 1, 2007
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    Extarordinary

    I loved it! Again you have created a work of art by weaving together words in such a amazing way that it captures my, and many others, attention. I hope you keep up the great work! *waves* keep in touch!


  • loveisamixedtape
    January 22, 2007

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    wow. like a nightmare--but so well told, it's kinda neat. it is, like the title states, "UNREAL". i like it!


  • dustookie2
    January 8, 2007

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    oh like this introductionsets up the darkness into the unreal....mmmmm ....... whoa a good walk in the dark is making me great imagery that just rolls into the movie inside my mind something i can really get into...you held my attention to the very end fantastic last line just brings it to the title. Very well crafted. thank you for the pleasure brilliant.