Give me that razorblade
I'll commit YOUR suicide
You're such an hypocrite, without even the strength to die
Give me that razorblade
I'll commit YOUR suicide
Just shut your mouth and end it, everything you say is a lie
Quit making youself into a 'poor sinner'
Quit taking pictures of blood running down your fingers
Quit trying to get me to pity you
Quit wearing black
Quit talking death and crack
Quit being someone else, we all know this isnt you
Give me that razorblade
I'll commit YOUR suicide
You're such an hypocrite, without even the strength to die
Give me that razorblade
I'll commit YOUR suicide
Just shut your mouth and end it, everything you say is a lie
Our Father
who art in heaven
hallowed be thy name
thy kingdom come, thy will be done
on earth as it is
in heaven
give us this day our daily bread
forgive us our tresspasess
as we forgive those who tresspass against us
lead us not into temptation
and deliever us from evil
amen
Give me that razorblade
I'll commit YOUR suicide
You're such an hypocrite, without even the strength to die
Give me that razorblade
I'll commit YOUR suicide
Just shut your mouth and end it, everything you say is a lie
May God have mercy on your soul
such a pitifull thing it is
And I hope you reach salvation
even if you're just a little bitch
So hand over that razorblade, back away from the ledge
we all know you'll never do it
you just wanted the attention
Just shut your mouth and end it...
You just want the attention
A contest entry
- Deep Dark Thoughts by Abstract Image.
330 points, ended August 11, 2007, 57 entries
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Comments
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wow this poem was so powerful and dark and for the first non prewrite i enjoyed it...good luck
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Very interesting poem/song. The first few lines are well chosen, if a bit scary, and instantly bring the reader straight into the whirling maelstrom presented here. The anger here is directed at something quite apropriate (i knew a guy like this, it was pathetic), and I can see where you're coming from. At the same time, actual wishing someone to get it over wit gives a really rather bleak view, as if you've just given up caring. Very effective. I like the use of the lords prayer in the middle. The religious tones through this are good, and I like the refence to the subject trying to fit in by being a typical 'outcast.' Very ironic. Nice.
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