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Jake the Snake

I love the way
His beard tickles my face
“Those colors are amazing”
As he points out the sky.

I love the way
He smells of clove cigarettes
And cheap vodka
“Damn, I was wasted last night”

I love the way
He calls me at midnight
“Your eyes are amazing!”
Drunk. Drunk. Drunk.

I love the way
“You fit perfectly in me arms”
A dingy pirate.
A solid gentleman.

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  • Sparow
    December 16, 2007
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    lol..sounds something like me....a bit...cool write