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Wandering Albatross

Strawberries on the windowsill
And I am thinking of you still

Invasive is
The Wandering Albatross
He asphyxiated the butterflies

Now, this Albatross
His feathers stroke my insides

I cannot eat
I cannot sleep

That Albatross is tickling my insides

Author notes

I chose a Wandering Albatross because they have an incredibly large wingspan.
If there was any confusion, i hope that cleared it up :]

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  • Sylar
    January 7, 2007
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    short and sweet

    It's short and to the point. just like this comment It's great