Lost inside the calming blue that is your eyes
Driven by your words, your love, your affection.
Lost in the warm, red grasp that is your heart
Marvellously awed by your warm, calm perfection.
Lost in the serenity that is your protecting arms
Blind to the sound, Deaf to the sight of all pain.
Lost in the soft fire that is your passionate kiss
Cast into oblivion to everything but your sweet name.
Lost in the charming melody that is your voice
Adorned by your flattery that turns me to honey.
Lost and melted by the soft seduction that is your touch
Indebted to your reassuring when things go bad for me.
Lost in space with you where you set me free,
I'm so very thankful, that you love and care for me.
Author notes
*heart* <3
My beloved Mike.
Sorry, Mom, I couldn't figure out how to do the heart thingy like you did.
I love you more than life itself, Mike. You are my only motivation to keep living. I love you.
P.S. I had to put the picture of Mike up there...he's so handsome...I love staring into those eyes.
A contest entry
- Let the love flow! by Poetic Aphrodite.
425 points, ended January 10, 2007, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Nice. Love the jacket. This poem is very good, Marisa. Well done. Very flowing and smooth. Lovely description.
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Aw Marisa, he is indeed cute and I can see why you love him so much Sweetie, this dedication to Mike is simply beautiful and I am sure he'll be as proud of it as much as he is in being your boyfriend, thankyou for submitting Sweetie, Love you Mom
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i think this is just wow, you did a great job on this it is amazing keep it flowing and wow. good lcuk in the contest
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wow
marisa,
your mike is so handsome.. when i'm reading this, make me want to cry.. such heartfelt words of love.. oh, let me catch me breath.. awesome poem.. the love masterpiece...
red roses
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