wakin up starvin,
cuz there anit nuttin to eat,
life in the ghetto anit so sweet,
now i gettin changed n lookin fo money,
but mi ass is broke,
n this shits not funny.
im walking out side,
n all i c iz fucked up bulidins,
n people buyin crack,
when they could be using that money to feed they children.
beef always accuring,
n people always be diein,
i dont know wat to do,
expect to keep tryin,
to survive,
n get out while theres still time!
Please tell me what you think
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There's still time..we have all the time we need....holla at ur gurl joe
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Hey this is an awesome poem! I'm not sure what to say except that I love it because it's real and just straight up, ya know what I mean? Anyway, hope you've been doin okay!
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THis is amazing... a lot of feelin... and I could totally picture this as a rap... being performed! New hit single... hehe! Rock On! xoxo Meg
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Very realistic I am assuming as I don't have a ghetto life so I am no expert. It is quite modern poetry as well due to the "n" instead and and and stuff like that. Have a good one. Anthony.
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craziii hot i dig it
i feel u on dis. i lived in da hood mah whole life and a shyt is nuttin but bad bu its up 2 u 2 turn dat shyt around ya dig. u gotta gift mah dude. spread it like wild fire iight. stay up stay strong much luv
frm
da on3 and onlii
black thought
~on3~
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it's not bad i can relate to this one but i have learned just because you were raised in the ghetto doesn't mean you have to stay in the gutter you propel yourself to an higher level.
nice try trying to share your thoughts with your words
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The ghetto life is a terrible one...but some of us emerge above it if we like..I like the poem it speaks to me cause I was raised in the ghetto as well
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