the blood runs through your veins
at the taste of it i go insane
i kiss your kneck softly with ore
waiting to drink the blood i adore
i promise it won't hurt
and i won't stain your wonderfully white shirt
i'll suck you dry to the bone
tonight you won't be going home
from now and till never
you my friend will live for ever
In a list
A contest entry
- Bone Daddy and the Pain Train by Aroarathebloody.
400 points, ended January 7, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Vampires and Blood! by okadadokie.
500 points, ended February 23, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Vampire Poems/Stories/Backgrounds by Darc Rebel Mafia 69.
600 points, ended July 10, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Interesting. Though it did seem a little shorter then I expected, still it is a good poem. Great job. Good luck.
~Oka
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good impression here of vampires. I'm not sure about the white shirt line though in comparison with the picture, but otherwise good write. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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vampires...
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