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You Are There

When I was on my knees crying out to You,

You were there.

When I was soaring high about the clouds,

You were there.

When the rain poured down upon me,

You were there.

When the sun shone on my hair,

You were there.

When I believed in You trusted You talked to You day and night,

You were there.

But now when I no longer believe in You when I feel betrayed by You when I no longer speak to You,

You are there.

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  • belowit
    January 7, 2007

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    it's good, i like the same thing that you kept putting in. YOU WERE THERE it gets the point across. ~b