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of man and days

dans un hypermarche qu'on appelle geant
je regarde deambuler des consommateurs insouciants
qui se succedent sur des dalles et s'en vont, inconscients
qu'a la fin du sentier des delires, resident les fleurs ultimes du neant

voguez, voguez braves gens !
vers une fin sans nom qui, nous tous, attend
amusez vous! ennivrez vous de sons et de bruits pour l'instant
car plus tard tout reste sur cette terre, ce n'est que nous
que la mort reprend...

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  • inspired torture
    January 28, 2007
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    and me who thought that i was alone in this world to think that way...


  • XFaLLen-StarX
    January 7, 2007
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    and yea you see, i made u walk against ppl's directions.. coz we're not most ppl .. and these thoughts are immortal..
    the day that ppl can get freed from all the material stuff is the day they can free their minds .. and i think ur on the road to that !!
    gr8 thoughts!!

    me
    xxx


    • sarajevo
      January 7, 2007
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      we're not most ppl...yes indeed lil sis...
      you cant imagine how great this makes me feel


  • less than a poet
    January 7, 2007

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    amusez vous! ennivrez vous de sons e de bruits pour l'instant
    car plus tard tout reste sur cette terre, ce n'est que nous que la mort reprend...

    well i felt so connected to these 2 lines since they are so true , u know what i like ur way of thinking and d way u just say what's in ur head and it just look great i envy that actually dont be scared ma bsib bil 3en


    • sarajevo
      January 7, 2007
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      thanks
      oh and dont worry ana ma bensab bel 3end

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