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A new angel

A little baby boy brought to the world,
with his great essence of purity and gold
crying and whimpering in his mother's arms,
what a precious gift from god

A smile praised by humanity,
A laugh loved by all the living,
they just can't resist
a baby's charm that was brought in

Cringing to his father's coat,
it's so heart-throbing,
love-engaging experience to hold
a baby's small hand within yours

House been ever so peaceful,
now filled with cries and laughter
of a child being brought up to be
some day a great man from his parentage

I pray for the lord,
to keep this wonderful child
to his family and siblings
Amen

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  • Starrchild777 gold member
    January 25, 2007

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    Yes, nicely penned and it builds and grows as does the child
    You employed the whole of its existence without being mundane and gave it a spark for which to grow
    ~sigh~

    ~*Starr*~ XXX


  • -Ink Artist-
    January 12, 2007
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    Wonderful

    This is such a beautiful piece for Baby Lane. Donnie and Abby will adore it. It reads with sincerity and a divine message of undying love between parents, baby, and God. I think it is truly wonderful! Thanks so much for your entry and good luck!

    ~Lori


  • ronnica
    January 7, 2007
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    All baby's should have these kind of welcoming's, blessings. and tributes to their future. well done


  • Phed
    January 7, 2007

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    Lovely

    This is so cute and sentimental baby. Well written.

    I like this stanza

    Cringing to his father's coat,
    it's so heart-throbing,
    love-engaging experience to hold
    a baby's small hand within yours