She fashions a black satin dress
That enhances her beautiful breasts
She tosses her long, blonde flowing hair
Loose and wild, and delicately fair
Her dress hugs her figure, nice and tight
She chose it especially for the events of tonight
She stands with attitude and a sexy stare
As he walks in the room and see’s her there
He stops right in front of her, longing to taste
The sweet flavours that await him below her waist
She held her stare for a moment or two
Before her most desirable passions come true
He placed his hand gently across her face
And through it, she could feel his heartbeat race
Kissing his hand now, she felt his grip tighten
He took her in his arms, and felt her enlighten
She locked her lips onto his, and kissed him deeply
His breathing quickened and he lifted her steeply
Carrying her over towards the king sized bed
He laid her down on her back and gently lowered her head
He slid his hands underneath her and unzipped her dress
As she arched her back he pulled it down to reveal her womanliness
Aroused as he was, he used his tongue to explore every inch of her skin
He slowed at her nipples, gently sucking, and she gave a silent moan from within
Her eyes closed tight and her breathing doubled as she felt his tongue below her hips
She indulged in the sensation that he was creating, using his tongue and lips
When he heard her breath get louder, he gripped her hips and pulled her down to him
He barely kissed her lips as he pushed himself inside of her, and moved deep within
Her head swung down and she arched her back, she could feel him moving inside her
He pushed deeper now and faster, becoming more aroused as her moans grew louder
Simultaneously they groaned, her body arched further, and she felt him come inside
He pulled away and lay next to her,
Holding her,
He whispered,
“I love you, Stay with me tonight”.
A contest entry
- Valentines Day by afireinthisheart.
600 points, ended January 8, 2007, 19 entries
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Hmm,
Nice write, could've lasted longer? Not the 1st-time i've said that*
*LOL* - She didn't seem to *Feel* Pain like a Vigin though did she? -
Great hott write
nice rhyming and imagery.
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Wow that was...erotic to say the least. I Like the time that was put into the preparation Slow and tender. But the ending was rushed but then again for the virgin they usually are aren't they.
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Wow...feeling and flow...there you go!!Awesome write
Whyitt Uxx
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Thankyou!
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beautiful
the beauty of love, and what the eyes do see. there is nothing more beautiful when in love, to be surrounded by absolute beauty...awesome write...smile
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Thankyou very much! =D
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