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Sunset

The sky is bloody,
The violent sun slicing
Through robin’s egg blue.

A contest entry

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  • Pollycheck
    December 3, 2007

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    The sky is bloody,
    The violent sun slicing
    Through robin’s egg blue.

    Thank you for your entry into my ku contest. you have portrayed a beautiful red sunset or sunrise with this haiku.

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    January 7, 2007

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    Wow, this was a unique write... i love the imagery you have created here, sensational job

    Karen