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Retribution of anger

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There was blood in his eyes
Like a ferrocious lion about to strike
Cold in all emotions hot but in motion
Closely watching his eyes again
I saw what raw emotions could be shaped by
And when he strikes me with the blow of Fate
I know I m dead before its late
Where can i save my soul I begin to think
When evil strikes can God hold anything
And so still silently dying like all do
But ask myself are we still just upto
Can we be of responsible for our action
Or will all be just an act of retribution...


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  • poetryality silver member
    February 24, 2007
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    Powerful thoughts wielded on this page. For sure when God is ready to strike the Earth with His wrath, I hope I am already passed on or am on my knees. The imagery is great from the very onset. I wish you well in this contest dear heart.


    Blessings & Love


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 7, 2007
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    oh, and thanks for entering in this contest

  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 7, 2007

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    dang girl thsi is strong you did a great job on this i mean dang i like it and all,it is deep and just like a fire in a way, keep it flowing


  • Maddogk
    January 7, 2007

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    A very deep and intensely fierce poem
    Makes you stop and think...
    What kind of world do we live in
    And how can we make it a better
    place to live.

    Beautifully composed and portrayed.

    Jeffro