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Never Ending Glow

 Never Ending Glow

 

My heart burns with deep love for you
And a never ending glow
That lingers on like a tender serenade
Of an old fashioned love song
With softly strummed guitars.


My love for you is more than true
Like a never ending flame
That will never flicker out.


Every time I hear the magic
And music of your melodic words
My heart begins to dance
As I float on a cloud of joy
Taking me to places high above
And exceeding my wildest dreams.


With you I feel like I’m in
A whirlpool of fantasies and dreams
As I desire to whisk you away
Into my private safari room
Of seclusion
And unlimited pleasures.


In this room we will delight in each other
As I surround myself with the splendor
Of your magic charms
And your parting lips
Just waiting to be kissed.


I can’t wait
To taste the dewdrops of desire
Dripping off your luscious lips;
That’s when you smile
At me playfully
And you begin to dance.


I am totally captivated by you
As I listen, watch and eagerly wait.


Your hips begin to move
With a rhythm and a slow thrilling tempo
Beckoning me
And urging my body to play
In your world
So I can explore
The passionate and secret places
You’ve kept hidden until now.


Your eyes are like
Burning embers of fiery heat
Drawing me to you.


I can smell the fragrance
Of your perfume
And taste the love on you
As it’s sweetness
Drizzles entirely over me
While your hips continue to move
With enticement
As every part of you
Desires to please me
With pleasures so rare.


Can you feel it?
Can you feel the magic?


It’s like there are nightingales
In our room
Showering us with
A soothing serenade
Of their sweet music
Blending in with the harmony
Of your dance
And our two hearts
That now knows
The meaning and mystery of love.


It’s like a soft veil
Falling down on us
And covering us
With mystical
And enchanting romance
Like two hearts
Woven into one shared
Untold ecstasy
And enveloping us
In the embrace of our passions.


Who would ever thought
Or could possible dream
That such love and passion existed?


My heart beats for you alone.


When you talk to me
Your every word pleases me
Like a comfortable lullaby,
And the love I feel from you
Is like magic medicine
Healing all my past heartaches.


Before you—my life was dreary;
With you my life takes on new and exciting meaning.


I can deeply feel your love for me
And I know
If I ever got caught up
In the web of failure
And strong tides run against me,
I can depend on you
And your love for me
To encourage my will
To keep on fighting,
Because when I am beside you
I am always a winner,
And I am confident
That when my spirit cries for understanding
It’s you—my love
Who will give me the tender peace of mind.


Because love is like a beautiful fragile flower
That must be handled with care
Like the delicate petals of a rose.


When I am nestled in your arms
Words sometimes need not be spoken
For me to know that no stormy weather
Or heartache’s pain
Can dull
My love for you.


Because like an eternal flame
And a never ending glow
My love for you
Will never flicker out.


And it was on that very special day
That I found the key
To love and happiness.
That very special day
Was the day I found you,
And like an eternal flame
It will never flicker out.

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  • creationsfromheart
    December 14, 2007

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    passion and tenderness

    Thank you for sharing this read I enjoyed it very much a bit longer than i normally care for a poem to read but you keep me in there to the very last line well done!


  • DystopianDweller
    November 17, 2007
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    Such passion, such eroticism. Very tender as well. Good flow overall, and great word choice, although the flow was a bit choppy in some lines. This piece reminded me of the opium dream in the novel Count Of Monte Cristo. For those who've read it, they will know what I mean. Thanks for the entry!


  • Knight Tigress
    October 10, 2007
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    This poem paints a gorgiouse picture of what "true love" really is and how rare it is to find a companion, as a lover and a friend! God bless you for bringing light to this world- can you be my ap grandfather? I absolutely love this peice, your imagery is beautifully written!!!


  • Knight70 silver member
    June 24, 2007

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    Beautiful visual!

    This stunning piece is also an eternal flame that will never flicker out. I loved every word of this, because it's written from the depths of your heart for the one you love. Bravo!

  • Fragile Heart
    April 13, 2007
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    Beautiful!

    I find it ironic that I just picked your name out of all others and I'm so glad I did. This poem was beautiful, and I wish I could think of a better way to put it, but words escape me. I especially loved the stanza that you spoke of romance and passion convering over you like a mystical veil, it was elegantly put.

    SweeterThanFiction


    • GoodKnightPoet
      April 14, 2007
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      I am happy you liked this poem. It is one of my favorites and very few people have made comments. It's like a mystical veil. Ha ha!

  • Eulb kcalB
    February 10, 2007
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    Hmmmm beautiful and very very romantic , I hope your lady knows how special you are...


  • Maddogk
    January 27, 2007

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    I have total confidence that your lady love would melt into an oblivious ~ shimmering pool of ecstatic liquid lust after reading about the intense ~ devoted love you have for her.
    An amazing array of words strung from deep within your heart, placed so delicately into a formation of beauty within a literary masterpiece ~ and hung out for the world to see.
    Amazing, just Amazing poetry my friend.
    Jeffro


  • Sweetangelgrace
    January 10, 2007

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    What a very sweet piece!!! If I will drink coffee, I am sure I will not use sugar (smile) honestly this is a fantastic poem and very well written my dear!

    While I am reading your entry i felt warm....so so spicy...hmmmm you rock my world and twisted my mind. Well, this is really amazing and how much more when I finished on reading... (wink)

    GRACE


  • Sandygram silver member
    January 7, 2007

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    A BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!

    This just melted my heart and I hope who you wrote it for realizes how much you love her. Your poetry is so romantic and makes me long for the love that is gone. But it still beats in my heart and always will. I think true love never ends but sometimes we must put it away and feel it's warmth from deep within on those long lonely nights. You are a very gifted writer. I love reading yout poems. They are very special and written with such passion and love. Thank you for sharing. Sandy

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