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You Say That You Love Me

You say that you love me,
But that isn't true.

You tell me we could be,
And thats a lie too.

You know that you hurt me,
As every minute goes by.

But it's hard to be angry,
At the perfect guy.

You know that I like you,
But you're leadin' me on.

Like they all do,
Soon enough you'll be gone.

I know that I want you,
but that wish wont come true.

I'm just something that you outgrew,
Soon enough I'll get over you.

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it's..............different than my usual

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  • ChrissyJean
    October 5, 2007
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    I can so relate hun! Amazing write!


  • THe UsEd
    January 10, 2007
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    awww Ginny

    *hugs u* awwwww so sad! i REALLY like it though^^ very well written


  • teenagefailure
    January 9, 2007
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    oh ginny im so sorry he's such an ass to do that but it'll be ok im always here for you ok?


  • Celticjedi
    January 9, 2007

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    Oh how pretty! I love this poem Ginny! And I take it the picture is from Final Fantasy? Hmmm...anyway, this might be different from what you usually write (my most recent is too), but it's really sweet with a touch of sorrow and I really love that! Keep writing Gin, miss you and love you!
    Hannah


    • SeeInBlackAndWhite
      January 10, 2007
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      Nah not final fantasy just random anime acctually thanks yeah it's different but it's a life story thanx lol


  • perfect relief
    January 7, 2007

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    It may be different than what you usually write, but it's good. It's nice to know that other people realize that one day you will be able to get over the person that can be a jerk to you. Unfortunately though, it's normally the ones that are jerks that you want the most...Awesome write!


    • SeeInBlackAndWhite
      January 7, 2007
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      yeah how very true that is, ah well we live and learn! thanks for the comment!
      Many regards,
      Ginny

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