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War

‘Bang!’ goes the soldier’s gun
Amid laughter and a boy,
gamboling in the sun.
‘Bang!’ goes the soldier’s gun
Amid terror striking deep
into the heart of war.

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  • Moonlit-Reveries
    January 14, 2007
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    Very short and powerful work that captures the destructive and disruptive qualities of war and how it interrupts and later destroys the lives of innocent civilians. one gunshot can do so much damage.

    I'm totally anti-war and I really enjoyed the emotions in this work.