your life may be over
but your still in my heart
you may not be living
but we're never apart
i still hold you close
with memories that wont fade
ill remember the friendship
that you and i made
your now my guardian angel
but your still a good friend
cause we have a friendship
that will never end.
Author notes
this isnt about just one person its about all my friends and family memebers that have passed. (RIP mi familia y mis amigos, te amo)
A contest entry
- HELP ME HELP THEM by magik hawk.
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This is a wonderful, heartfelt poem. Loss is hard to cope with but it's great to enshrine those who have left you through poetry. One thing I noticed, you use your when you should use you're. Overall very nice.
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This was a beautifully written heartfelt poem you can feel the raw emotion just flowing off the page you penned a beauty only thing is its spelled guardian but thats the only flaw very well done best of luck to you in the contest
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I know the family will really appreciate this wonderful heartfelt piece! It is penned from a loving heart I can tell. I enjoyed reading this one and I wish you all the best... Thanks for sharing and many blessings.. you have done a wonderful thing here!
Frogz~ -
this is relaxing, it helps EVERYONE he knew, its somthing i will have printed out at his memorial if you dont mind and if the family doesnt.. i still need to get these poems to the family so i dont know how soon it can be seen, but i do love it, and will make sure its seen..
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Thank you so much for entering this contest; your poem was very poignant and very well done
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