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The Rising Industry

Unable to cry out for help
Enduring an unrelentless hell
Disease without vaccination
Injections constantly in rotation
Forced into sex just to produce another product
Children sold to another owner
Worked to death
The young murdered for profit
Living quarters.dirt floors.feces.disgust.hate
Holocaust and slavery...old fashioned terms
A new generation...a new structure...new slaves
Flesh sold for food
Enjoy your meal

Author notes

We have to think about what we are doing in this world. This can't be right.

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  • ArcticIllusion
    February 2, 2007

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    This was a very good piece. It is short but theres alot of feeling and strong emotion in each verse. Great work.


  • miss.evil
    January 11, 2007
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    Interesting hun. Damn it! I hate when you make me think. =P


  • Seven Kinky
    January 7, 2007
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    That's a pretty revolting picture. You make your point well without it, though. Wonderfully thought provoking write, my friend. Nice to see someone writing about worldly issues in their poetry. *stands and applauds*