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No Choice(Senyru)

you,the stars,the moon
on a balmy night in June
what's to do but spoon.

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Written May 30th, 2003

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  • Branndi
    September 2, 2005
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    Good job!

    LOL @ earlier comments
    Edited on Sep 02, 4:34 because 'typo!'.


  • Lurie
    May 31, 2003
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    LOL Hopefully everynight will be balmy then!!!! LOL
    Nice write Bill! ~Laura


  • Nam
    May 31, 2003
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    6/10

    Why just a balmy night in June? Why not every night in June. Or just every single night of the year? I guess spooning would get tiring after awhile, but, spooning leads to forking so its ok.