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Polyacrostic Palimpsest - Versatile Verse

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Acrostic : Verse in which certain letters form a word or message
Polyacrostic : Several acrostics within the same composition

 

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Acrostics to be found below :
Versatile Verse - Vanity Set Verse
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Palimpsest : A manuscript on which more than one text is written
with earlier writing, or one level of meaning, partially visible.  
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The text appears twice here :.
I : plain text - in black
II: Complete acrostic palimpsests highlighted

Enjoy !

 

 

Versatile Verse - Vanity Set Verse           

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Vanity within a verse scheme gave

Each alphomega, each word's aura, ease.

Run through in print, as content rhymes to please,

Springs, rising sprightly, links few see, most crave.

Apart here thread we tight, taut, autoclave,

Tacit, yes, yet pate-play may seem tease.

In lines smooth I express this hidden frieze, -

Lucid keepsake, light, keen, subtle stave.

Emphatic theme expect, - interpret rave !

Vain verse-vine vile ? Voice very vivid ? Seize

Externals terse are shade, sense secret keys.

Rare is this art, rare verses are, - rhyme save.

A sonnet's stress sometimes less shows than's hid, -

Here's an example baring message grid.   

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Versatile Verse - Vanity Set Verse  

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Vanitywithinaverseschemegave

Eachalphomegaeachwordsauraease

Runthroughinprintascontentrhymestoplease

Springsrisingsprightlylinksfewseemostcrave

Apartherethreadwetighttautautoclave

Tacityesyetpateplaymayseemtease

Inlinessmoothiexpressthishiddenfrieze

Lucidkeepsakelightkeensubtlestave

Emphaticthemeexpectinterpretrave VainversevinevilevoiceveryvividSeize

Externalsterseareshadesensesecretkeys

Rareisthisartrareversesarerhymesave

asonnetsstresssometimeslessshowsthanshid

heresanexamplebaringmessagegrid.

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  • aanika-xox silver member
    August 11

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    wow!
    this is amazing.
    I've always considered acrostics kind of juvenile but you just changed my mind COMPLETELY.
    great job.
  • Wow, I love acrostics, I've never seen anything like this. Very intense write. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


    whisper

  • daviscth silver member
    March 2

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    This is a first for me! Thanks for posting it in mycontest. I really enjoyed this and think it must have given you a great headache!

  • Heavens Child
    August 17, 2007

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    Okay....I'm blown away. I asked for unique, original and creative and this is definately it! Amazing, a rare talent, one I have not seen before. Thank you for the entry in my contest.

  • tender-butterfly
    July 23, 2007

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    Interesting

    I think I need to go through this a few times again... It really gets to me...in a good way that is...
    Nicely done

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  • Nicolette gold member
    January 7, 2007

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    Amazing..

    Jonathan

    You are such a word-artist, my friend. I can see that you love words, love language and that you love to play with all the possibilities language offers us. These acrostics and polyacrostics of yours are something else and indeed they're versatile! I think you've said it yourself "Rare is this art, rare verses are.." - for this is rare indeed. A rare and exceptional talent you have. I do hope more people read and experience the intelligence on this page.

    ~ Nicolette

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