pull me into your arms of lust
push so deep with a forceful thrust
falling in hate, no sense of trust
lingering longer, it's almost a must.
look me in the eye and lie to me
i love how needy you pretend to be
caught in a moment of uncertainty
lets reverse the misfortune of this calamity
after tonight lets never talk again
will you tell your girlfriend where you've really been?
I'll be the audience, if you're the comedian
i'm laughing at you not with you in the end
running back when she finds out whats real
the antagonizing pain you must feel
it's nothing, though, that i can't heal
your secret life you can't conceal
the longer we go the less it hurts
the harder, the faster, your thoughts divert
in delight and satisfaction you assert
what you wouldn't do for such a cheap dessert
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A contest entry
- B/r/e/a/k me down && Call me a [[.tragedy.] by Heartbeatsxfading.
300 points, ended June 21, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - -x-Whore-x- by xxRainbowDawnxx.
550 points, ended June 20, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*~All Your Dirty Pretty Comes Here~*~ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
625 points, ended December 30, 2008, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Sex poems ever:Enter as many as you Like i want a 100 by cali951.
1300 points, ended August 18, 2007, 49 entries
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this is a poem that held my attention
Riftkin -
well you sure do tell it like a whore probably feels i really dont know but its kinda sad but than not really but this poem was alright could have been better more details good job and good luck in my contest
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I know how this is. I am treated like a whore most of the time and it's really digrading. I've had a fair few guys offering to pay me for sex and just guys putting their hands where they shouldn't and thinking it's alrightr as I'm a slag and I wont mind as I like it dep down though I wont admit it... Sick really, but that's why I don't respect blokes and use them like they use me.
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Most definately my dear friend is this a disturbed reality or not. You can't keep secret lives secret forever, though it may take time and it may be long the truth always comes out somewhere... Normally when you least want it to come out, trust me I should know! Murphy's Law; if something can go wrong it will go wrong.
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I don't often comment on poems in my contests but this poem was exceptionally good.
Good luck!
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wow, that makes me feel really good! thank you
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i love the last line of this poem, you ended it very well.
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nice. hot. wow.
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