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Haiku 12 - muddy puddles

deliberately
walking in muddy puddles:
because told not to

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  • micol
    November 9, 2007

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    Makes me smile. You've captured one of our neighbor children without even knowing him. He--like the poem--made sormy days fun. Well done.

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    November 7, 2007

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    Ahhh this sounds like me as a kid, always the little rebel, I love this piece, one of my faves so far, glad I am not judging... lol

    Karen


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    October 30, 2007
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    I think I would walk in puddles just for the fun of it and not care of anybody's wishes. A very nice write. Good luck in the Rain Haiku Contest!


    Ted E


    PS: Calling ALL Rain Lovers: a group has been started for you:

    http://allpoetry.com/group/show/I%20Truly%20Love%20The%20Rain


  • azure85 gold member
    October 28, 2007

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    deliberately
    walking in muddy puddles:
    because told not to

    A good haiku-and the inner child comes out in this one alot, well done!