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This Bed

This bed so lonely and vacant
Solo within the depths of my soul
Yearn for a cuddle so very deep
Not the feathers in my pillow

This bed so white and so empty
Enormous gap of zero caress
Forgotten what pleasure feels like
Or the taste of a sensual kiss

This bed takes me off to sleep
What sexy dreams will fulfil
Only the boring silent ones
Cause no-one loves me still

Fuck this bed and all it's worth
When no erotica happens here
This bed is just a massive void
Of pillows filled with tears

The feathers disappeared

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  • Earth Mother
    January 8, 2007

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    Persils out!

    Your bed is too white. You need Black satin sheets and a big thick PURPLE throw like mine> Oh im wicked!!!!!!!!!!


    • Scrunter
      January 8, 2007
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      I also need a bloke to fill it dun I!!!
      Yes, you are pure evil. x