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[ A broken look in her glimmering eyes. ]

A broken look in her glimmering eyes.
A single tear makes her face shine.
The words he spoke, they broke her down.
Changed the way she felt all along.
 
One more sip;
another pill; another hit.
It can't hurt more then his words.
 
I love you.
(wait no, scratch that.) 
I love you.
^      
hate    
(replace the words that once ment the world)
 
I can't feel you here any more,
I can't touch you; your far to distant.
Far to faitle.
 
One more sip;
another pill; another hit.
It can't hurt more then a blade through the heart. 
 
She stood there as the door slammed,
the pilars of her heart fell.
Her soul collapsed.
She asked the genie at the bottom of the bottle,
as it appeared in second hand smoke.
She asked the angel standing next to her,
as it rested its hand upon her shoulder 
to save her from herself.
Save her from the demons he set free,
as he cut deep into her.
 
One more sip;
another pill; another hit.
It can't hurt more then what she's doing to herself.. 

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yes the title is the first line why? cause it is and i couldnt think of another title.

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