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Creation's Symphony

Master's designs refined.
embellished over time.
Beauty seen in his lasting keep,
his brushstrokes so sublime.
Velveted clouds float by,
pale stars of bluish sequines deep.

Soft wings of angel fly,
strum songs as soft as sighs.
Melodies of heavenly strings,
songs of sweet lullabys.
Into the heaven's climb,
ambrosia feast of heaven's reach.




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  • Samplette gold member
    January 10, 2007

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    Profound and beautiful. Such a powerful a nd enjoyable read. thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 8, 2007

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    BEAUTIFUL!!

    One can only try to write of God's scenery in this world. The actuall sights are almost impossible to describe, though you have done a truly wonderful job here with these lovely words.


  • Sherry gold member
    January 7, 2007

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    Oh Suseann,

    Wow what a beautiful spiritual piece this is in tribute to God's creation in nature so refreshing you just sculpted a portrait of enjoyment to the soul in this lovely. Love, Sherry

     


    • suseann
      January 7, 2007
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      Oh Sherry. This was harder then pulling eye teeth for me. Took me a half hour of revisions .Look at the requirements in form.Thank you dear heart. I'd never seen this form before ,but enjoyed the challenge.


  • Kari gold member
    January 6, 2007

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    I love anything dealing with angels and wings mentioned in a poem..wonderful work sweety. The best of luck to you in the contest.

    Kari


  • JazzALTernative silver member
    January 6, 2007

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    I love the concept of the sky as symphony. Thanks for bringing this to the page in such an adept way. The words seem to sing, with only a light sense of rhyme. Your choice of words ultimately make the poem - they seem to draw from a little gem box brought out special for this occasion.


  • Cherokee
    January 6, 2007
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    Give someones else a fighting chance, would you?!


    • suseann
      January 6, 2007
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      From what I have the privledge to partake of in yours,I'll have to wish for the best. Not an easy thing to write was it?


  • Sagergirl
    January 6, 2007

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    Wonderful job with this. I loved the images it portrayed. I'm always pleased to find uplifting poems to read on this site. "Melodies of Heavenly Strings,
    songs of sweet lullabies", just beautiful. Great work!

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