A breaking image
Of self destruction
The drugs
Take their toll
She couldn't control
Her addiction
Twenty years later
The cracks begin to show
Author notes
24 words
A contest entry
- 30 words or less by burdened.
400 points, ended January 11, 2007, 22 entries
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this is a great piece, and the picture matches perfecxtly, well done on creating this. i like the flow, it is simple but effective. thanks for entering and good luck. XxX
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wicked
Yeah spot on scrunter,keep it up. from earth Mother
p.s. 4got to say the cracks are a sure sign of falling apart. -
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Thankyou for commenting and your right, the cracks are a sign of falling apart.
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Wow, very nice. The image and words put together like that. Simple and it tells alot.
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Much appreciated comment so thankyou.
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