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Outlaws

Life hates me,
Life hates you,
So lets turn out the lights,
And do as the outlaws do.
Kiss your cheek
Lay you down.
Stare out the window,
Watch the town.
Trying this thing called living,
And we're going nowhere fast
Might as well enjoy it
For it's not gonna last.

Author notes

Uh.. That was..random. alot of my poems are. I wrote it in spanish class like.. a month ago and figure i'd post it in here.

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  • Twist of Faith
    January 23, 2007
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    Sometimes random is good! I loved the rhyme and the rythmn. Almost lyric-like, IMO.