I wake up to a gentle sound.
I discover it's drops of rain.
Flowers can be seen over the hillside.
The animals will appear if I hide.
Gods creations are all around, is what I find.
Picturesque are the memories sealed in my mind.
A contest entry
- Spiritual Inspiration by mysticstorm.
450 points, ended January 7, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love the nature involved in this...pretty write...
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great poem! was it picture - inspired? i like the last two lines a lot!
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very nice poem thanks for your comment in my poem.
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So much said in such a little poem bigger then what it seems.. Very powerful and thought provoking..
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Hi!
Princess!
Shouldn’t be a raised question as to whether proceedings are according to the rules. From cradle to the lasting home was made by Him, God.
I like the poem the way you painted imagery that concerns the beauty of God. There is no rift in the creation of The Almighty The Creator of Universe.
A perfect beautiful line:
(God’s creations are all around)
Yes indeed!
Take care!
Scarzat
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This is a lovely poem. Filled with beautiful imagery. I love the last line. It leaves a peaceful and appreciative tone as a rememberance of this gorgeous poem.
Good luck in the contest.
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Beautiful
You have mentioned some of my favorite things. Those are among the things that make life wonderful and you have captured them perfectly. I enjoyed this very much. That you for sharing your heart and insight.
My best to you,
David
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What a beautiful write!...I loved it!..
debbie
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Very nice. It was short and i prefer longer poems but this one explained itself a lot with those very few lines. I especially liked your 2 ending lines.
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This is a great poem you penned here princessdove, I love the sound of rain coming down on a peaceful relaxing day, any type of weather actually as long as this cold winter weather goes away.
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this makes me think back to a child when i used to lay in the middle of field in the rain just to watch the rain. not sure why,lol. i love it very picturesque nice to read very relaxing and indeed beautiful. H x
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This piece almost seemed to have a dream-like feel to it when I read through it. Kind of nostalgic for me as it's an image that I conjure up within my mind a lot. You did a nice job at bringing a vivid image to life within just a few short lines. Very nice work.
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This painted a beautiful picture short yet so amazing you've penned an amazing write only thing it was a little hard to read
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papakonaspa
I like your poem you describe nature tha way it is. I also like nature and gives me a lot of spirit to write. thanks for your comment in my poem. write to me apapakon@alba.edu.gr -
Beautiful!
It is such a wistful poem, I love the part: The animals will appear if I hide.
As it is so true.
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Nicely done, Great job of bringing out the feeling you get after a rain shower. Made me wish for springtime.
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What a beautiful poem and picture!
I like this nature poem so much! May I please post it on the poetry blog that I run for a newspaper in California? You can find it at blogcentral.thereporter.com/planet and we get between 500 and 800 hits a day! I could use your poetry name or your real name.
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Backatcha
Nice too!
df
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Very nice short but sweet. I like how you call all things God's creation, it send a sentimental touch
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portrayed the beauty of nature in so few lines...that will linger in the mind...
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Nature and all that is in there is lovely and you have written about rain, animals and the countryside that is where God's creativity can be found.
Easy to read and understand what it is you are saying in these lines.
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Being a fan of rain... I find the poem comforting and calming. Specific, easy to lose yourself in especially if you are stressed at the time! It takes your mind some where else if you go with the flow. A nice escape if only for a brief moment.
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Visions Sent
Very nice written piece. Reminds me of a very old song I listened to this morningcalled: "On The Wings of a Snow White Dove"...he sends his pure sweet love, I see signs of God's love in your poem. (smile)
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this is really beautiful poem, i love the gentle imagery it evokes, you've done a good job here,
well done,
kind regards,
floorboards
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Very beautiful
I like this very much, sweet tone
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Princessdove, Nature fills our hearts with many lovely sights and sounds. You filled my heart and my mind's eye with that through your words here. I want to thank you for sharing them and wish you the best in this contest. Keep the ink flowing and enjoy what you just wrote about. You get my applause most definitely, along with a standing ovation. Love and God bless, Joyce
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You captured a perfect picture with this. Good luck in the contest
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Please check last line. I will comment at closing.
Thank you!
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So beautifully and perfectly written....enjoyed the read so much....keep up the great work.....smiles, Terry
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