Searching my true self,
A long time has passed,
Still wandering -
in the woods of dark;
Something is there which,
Always keeps on disturbing me,
and compelling my mind,
to retrospect and search.
Something which cuts.
the WINGS of self esteem,
stops my flight-
flight-that will take me higher,
to my ultimate destination..
flight-that will set me free,
Of all worldly emotions.
I've come a long way searching,
but can only see puzzling square,
which WAY to choose -
its hard to decide at this moment.
Please tell me what you think
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Welcome
Life is what this poem reminds me of. Every unknown ever chance that we have to take. You never know what road to walk or if its going to be the right one. You just have to walk blindly out into the dark forest. I really loved the intristing form in this. Great write
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Johnathan
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thanx for comment///////
hey i liked ur poem n got inspired so i've written another poem i'll post it tonight..
i will love to have ur opinion
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Hi Tarun....
Welcome TO AP!!!!
Let your light pen give birth to millions of poems....
All the best!
Your start about self-search is really beautiful....
This tone of introspection will help you reach good heights my dear fren...
love
Kiddy
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Welcome to AP
Very well done! Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to AP; a very fine write, indeed!
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