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Friendship

Slowly it creeps under your skin
True friendship you feel deep within
It doesn't brag, it doesn't yell
It's quietly feeding your ego well
Don't have to talk or write each day
True friendship speaks in its own way
It's there when needed, never forsakes
It's drinking tea and eating cakes
Laughing at a joke being told
It's comforting in a tender hold
True friendship is a two-way street
You know it's there when soulmates meet
Be careful not to waste its gift
Life's too short and time's too swift




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  • x Star Dust x
    August 5, 2007

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    BRAVO!!! Perfectly said! Excellent flow! Excellent write! Excellent period! Thanks for entering my contest!


  • Kitesen
    January 11, 2007
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    no comments and thats an honourable meaning


  • individuality gold member
    January 9, 2007

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    take away the apostrophies, as having them there changes the meaning/flow of your poem. by using it's you are saying either it is or it has when it should just be its used.

    • JustADutchie gold member
      January 9, 2007
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      Thanks a bunch, now I understand, my mistake. I still make many and learning a lot from all people who will point them out to me. Thanks.

  • individuality gold member
    January 9, 2007
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    True friendship speaks in it's own way - its rather it's as you are not saying speak in it is own way.
    Be careful not to waste it's gift - again its rather than it's as you are not saying here not to waste it is gift.
    aye friendship, we should not take it for granted but just let it flow and enjoy it spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...

    • JustADutchie gold member
      January 9, 2007
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      Thanks

      Thanks for your comment but I'm not sure I understand exactly what you're saying here. Maybe due to the fact that I'm a Dutchie?


  • Angel With No Halo
    January 6, 2007

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    True words written my dear.. yet another great write.. and a cute little background..thanks bunches for entering !!

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