alone facing the light
motivated by love
I impart this gift
you're not a possession
and not possessable
not even by you
seeking only your best
I get the best of you
as its champion
an honor never sought
wanted not
needed not
accepted with joy
one who asks you ignore
what makes your spirit shine
cannot truly love
to oppose destiny
is to live just to die
to lose the spirit
your mind is clear and sound
and your spirit is strong
intend your courage
Author notes
I made a second version of this for a contest. I think I actually like that version better, as I re-edited some problem spots.
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full of meaning this piece , like most if not all of your work ..thank you for the great read...and so I am learning quite a lot
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This is truly amazing and beautiful and I felt and believed the emotions that you ecpressed within this piece and it's just oh my god words can't even describe how it made me feel and it makes you want to cry alittle bit.
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Thanks for the kind words. It motivates me. Makes me want to buck up and get over whatever I need to.
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