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Lie

You turn to me for some sympathy
But I won’t catch you automatically
Because, and this is how it seems to me,
That you’ve built your concrete wall
And now, afraid of acting cowardly
You want release immediately
You’ve seen the regiment charge
And, now, almost guiltily
You want to be the hero
Their savior, the one and only
With temporary responsibility
You look to me, I don’t know why
And I'm almost sorry as I say,
“You’ve made your deathbed;
Now lie.”

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  • xxLet It Die
    January 6, 2007
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    wow very deep. loved the flow