swirling thoughts
from life's beginning to
an ever lasting thought
sparks of life and shadows
of death intertwine together
as one end and the other begins
the hand of creation lite years
before i wrote this poem has started
and has already ended
the dinosaur fighting for his life
has but ended
the eye of creation with a blink can
crush what he has already started
the endless space with the endless stars
go on forever unlike our
but we have power we just don't know
for we are parts of little matter that
circle around
for i am this picture and i am the color
and before i was born, i was another
two shades of red or maybe three goes into brown
than into cream, the blends into white and many shades of black that bring out the stars, for i was a star before i was me, matter that was not born, a process that slowly took form
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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WAO
this one was amazing thought I could not see the picture your words were so inspired that only by reading just like a puzzle the image was getting clear
I love the way you played with philosophical concepts
"for i am this picture and i am the color
and before i was born, i was another"....
"for I was a star before I was me"....simply brilliant!good luck!


