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Call Out To The Sane

Lull me to Sleep
Ever so gently
One false move
Collpasing my battered soul
And non-existent heart
Rock me compassionatley
As if it is your sole desire
Such suclusion consumes me
Relieve my worn and abused mind
Bring too conscience,
The strength I posess
Living without body
Cover these scars
With willingly open palms
Fell all I've with drawn
Surround my open wounds
Secure theyre ability to heal
Lye next to me
Holding me, reconstructing me
Wash away the blood
I bled so feircly that night
Conclude me in ways
I never thought possible
Dephen this ringing
I hear too often within my brain
Lead me too life
A call out to the sane
Bring forth life, my dearest
For this poor abused mind that I harbor
Cannot hide, much longer...

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  • LaurenLightning--x
    May 28, 2007

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    This is beautiful.
    It's so powerful and really leaves an impact on the reader. Especially after reading the two final lines, they're brilliant and really finnish the poem off well.
    I love the lines :

    Surround my open wounds
    Secure theyre ability to heal

    As they put vivid images in my head.

    Thank you for entering and good luck!! =]


  • La Tua Cantante
    April 11, 2007
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    Well written! I can relate on how you feel. I have things with lullabys, and sleep in poems or songs, for some reason I really like it. You are a wonderful writer from what I can gather from this poem. This is a really remarkable piece you have written here. Good luck in my contest! -La Tua.


  • night-eyed demon
    January 5, 2007

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    very dark... but i still like it. I like how you use the words, their put together just right.nice write and don't stop the pencil flow.

    friend, marius *rose