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With that Sword

Hurt is such a complex word,
And pierces your heart with a sword.
You said forever and always,
That soon stopped once you swayed.
I tried to fix things but you wouldn't listen,
You broke my heart as tears started to glisten.
I called and called but you never picked up,
I guess I am gone, as wine in an empty cup.
You will never know how much I loved you,
Or how much I cried each night too.
You killed my soul and heart,
You ripped and tore it all apart.
Love is such a complex word,
And also pierces your heart with a sword.

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  • doughjoe silver member
    January 18, 2007
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    Thanks for your entry