A journey that takes you beyond the rules of travel and the realm of time…
What has your life turned into?
One big question mark…
Autumn leaves swirling in seemingly random patterns
Rain drops dripping
With monotone notes of melancholy
Just a dance where dreams and illusions mate and mix…
Just a simple minuet, you undertake with crooked feet
Just a simple catatonic behavior that’s been built on the upside of anger…
Run for the hills…
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These are impressive and convincing pictures for the central question: What is life?
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you give poetry a reason to be read..
Amazing
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thanks
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exactly! well said and well done!
you know i share what u said mostly 100%
always feel infatuated by ur work,(it;s minute right?)
all of my appreciation,
pascale
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no i did mean minuet,it's an old dance that came before the waltz...
thanks for your comment sweety,i'm so proud i can get through to you
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i read this many times already n i still dt know wut so say...
think am gna quote tephy on this one.. great mind...
amazing mind..
~rana~
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i think you already did ..
and this just took my mind away..
"Rain drops dripping
With monotone notes of melancholy
Just a dance where dreams and illusions mate and mix…"
this is not a definition, its more like a trip ..
gr8 mind!
me
xxx
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