Out the shadows they hound,
speaking the unspoken greys
Tormenting the dreadful beings
Howling in the silence,
of tomorrow's light to come
out the shadows they hound
Wolferns of night-falls,
restraining the freedom of living
Tormenting the dreadful beings
Once they howl,
there is no turning back
out the shadows they hound
A vicious lady accompaning them,
making them her slaves
tormenting the dreadful beings
A sacred regardness
of the night's moon
out the shadows they hound,
tormenting the dreadful beings
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I was inspired to write this one from this painting http://www.imaginistix.com/details.cfm?Id=919
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Hi, I came here from your contest on forms always willing to learn a new one as it helps me grow as a poet. I like this as a read, it tells and interesting story, I haven't looked at the picture you wrote it from but I'm guessing it a pack of wolves or dogs running through a night forest with a mistress leading them on.
I hope I at least get it somewhat right as that is the image I'm getting from the poem and I do like the way it reads.
A question though, I haven't written for your contest yet and I suck at forms as a general rule so I'm not sure I actually will but on that page you said the style has a set rhyme pattern, I'm having trouble identifying it in your peice, sorry but I would love an explaination because if I do enter I would like to try to get it right.
Also the word 'turmenting', should that be 'tormenting'.
Sorry if you would have rathered this come as an IM, I did like the poem and thought it deserving of a quick round of applause and the only way I can do this now is by commenting as well.
Adrian
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that's alright darling, thank you - and I overlooked that spelling mistake, thanx for letting me know ^-^ I'll get back to u about the form shortly
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