Seconds die and I long for
The crystal moment
When your face
Rises from the clouds of solitude
And takes me into the fathomless
Depth of eternal bliss
Of being
One with you…
If you only knew,
How every fiber of my body
Breathes infinite fairies
Who whisper your name.
If you only knew,
How much every string of my soul
Prays for the sweet melody of your voice
To enchant the ears of universe
With their heavenly scent
If you only knew,
How the velvet look of those black eyes
Delves within me,
Quenches my heart’s desire for drops of love,
And lets the nectar of love flow
Into every lonely veins of my heart
If you only knew…
If you only knew…
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful indeed!
Dear Mr. Rezaee
What in this piece was observable was love itself.. a power helping you flow it through your words to create something which is named “A Love Poem” and by your choice “If You Only Knew”. What is love? Is love a candle when it melts away and heaves a sigh? Or a butterfly when she place life on her palm and burns away in presence of her beloved (Candle)? Or maybe love is woe when it is painted with the color of joy!
The strange point is many people –not just poets- have talked about love. Love is love itself with its own attractions and pain of course.
Honestly a beautiful piece from a clever/lovely thoughts.
Thanks for sharing with us :-)
~Vernal Bloom~
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Lovely and touching. Thank you for entering it into my contest.
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Ahhhh, just lovely, this piece left me doe eyed and feeling all soft and mushy...it doesn't happen very often that I am reduced to something that resembles warm honey... I am lost for words, but be sure, I am feeling every word inside, the longing, lonliness and love are quite evident
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Heartfelt
And heartwarming. Your poem is beautiful, the words flow with such ease. Great imagery. It unfolds and draws the reader into your writing. Good job.
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