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A Haiku For Grum




The Children can't sleep
High from a chocolate buzz
She always spoiled us

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For my beloved "Grum" (Grandmother)
Rest In Peace

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    January 20, 2007
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    Awww sweet, my grandpa used to do that too, but only one square of choccie at a time, wonderful job here

    Thankyou for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you the very best of luck

    Karen


  • Arkbear gold member
    January 6, 2007
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    Very cool ~

    Grandmothers are the best ~

    Good job Cubby ~

    Papa Bear ~


  • Sacred Ground
    January 6, 2007

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    Love It!

    Jeremy, this is an awesome haiku. The love you have exposed in these short lines is sweet and with abundance.
    Love ya.


  • soulfultia gold member
    January 5, 2007
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    Cute!

    Well written Haiku Loved it...~Tia