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Notice Me

Notice me
I'm wearing that outfit you like
The tight skirt
The push-up bra
The ponytail with teased ends
All for you

Notice me
I'm talking the way that you like
Seen and not heard
Speak when spoken to
Innocence is in softness of the voice
Because you want me to

Notice me
I'm acting the way you want me to
I'm faking sweetness
Pretending innocence
Hiding away behind the makeup
That's what you like

Notice me
I've thrown away my person
The girl who stands here is a shell
All perfection, no inflection
My only flaw is the desire for you to

Notice me

Please tell me what you think

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  • Kari gold member
    January 4, 2007

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    This was a very deep, and painful write..I think all of us sometimes want to feel noticed but it is like...everyone still keeps avoiding us at the same time. Great job.

    Kamala Kari