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Sorrow's Prayer

Now is the hour,
  when fear and sorrow
Praise the world,
    from the shade and shadow

Sleep my Love
Sleep my Only, Deep
In the Dark

Deviance dances with Nightmares
Gracefully, I will appear
Wanting to steal you away from tomorrow's hate,



Catching the Moonlight with Shadows
Breathtaking, Terribly real
Throwing myself into your sweet embrace


Can you not see how I love you?
Beautifully, killing my fears
The world is now held in our embraced hearts

Author notes

inspiration...charlottes web. she has an eerie beauty about her.

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  • Melissa Burns
    December 13, 2007

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    Very nice poem. Interesting where the inspiration came from, it makes you read the poem again, a little slower to see what comes up. Anyways, what a nice poem


  • Fallen Angel x
    January 17, 2007
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    this is a pretty good poem. keep up the good work.
    <3 Falon


  • Kari gold member
    January 4, 2007

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    aww this was very beautiful..and yes I do agree..I really like Charlottes web myself. It's a wonderful story with lots of metaphors in it.

    Kamala Kari